How Story Structure Saved the Princess, the Knight, and the Lamb
Years ago, I came up with this presentation for a local writing group and blog. Since then, I’ve had tons of requests to share it again. So I’m posting it here for all of my K&T friends.
I love writing, but I hate plotting. I’m much more comfortable having no idea what’s going to happen, writing out of order, then putting all the pieces together like a puzzle. Of course this means tons of revisions and time. So, to increase my productivity, I’ve read every craft book ever written and taken online plotting classes. And while I’d still rather wing the writing, one of my favorite devices is Anne Lamott’s story structure mnemonic.
From A to E, it’s short and easy to remember. For those of you who don’t know it, I’ll give a short re-cap.
Action (which includes the inciting incident), Background (backstory, which is now woven throughout the story), Conflict (goals, motivations, and hindrances), Development (protagonist’s journey) and End–parts 1 & 2 (crisis and resolution). Since I’m also a strong visual learner, I’ve come up with a visual representation of Ms. Lamott’s device, with an added prologue (because I love prologues, especially in stories where the heroine is a four-year old with a vivid imagination).
And this is how Ms. Lamott’s Story Structure saved the Princess, the Knight, and the Lamb.
Once upon a time, there was a Princess who wanted to play “Save the Lamb from the Evil Witch.” Except she didn’t have anyone to play with. So, with a smile and a cookie, she asked her twin brother, the Knight, “Will you play with me?”
He responded with a mouth filled with chocolate chips, “Will there be fighting?”
“Yes,” she said. “With swords.”
He smiled. “I’m in!”
“We have to hurry,” the Princess said. “We must save the Lamb from the Evil Witch who lives on the other side of the dark mountain. But first we need to find the unicorn.”
“Do we kill the unicorn?” the Knight asked.
“No. We feed the unicorn some magic acorns. Then she will tell us how to defeat the witch.”
“Okay!” The Knight grabbed his sword. “Let’s go.”
Once the Princess and the Knight got to the magic forest, the Knight said, “It’s dark and scary. Let’s feed the unicorn and get out of here.”
“First we have to find the fairies who will give us the magic acorns.”
He raised his sword high. “Let’s do it.”
“We can’t just ask the fairies for the acorns.”
“Why not? And when do I use my sword?”
The Princess sighed. “The fairies will have three riddles for us to answer, then we have to attend the magical fairy feast where they will try to poison us. But we can get an antidote for the poison from a talking rabbit who will betray us, but then become our mentor and guide and be redeemed.”
“I don’t understand,” the Knight said. “How come there’s so much talking? Where’s the action? When do I get to fight something?”
“After we get away from the fairies and the rabbit and find the unicorn, you’ll have to slay the dragon.”
“Whoa!” he said with a huge grin. “There’s a dragon?”
“Yes,” she said. “But don’t touch his gold. It’s enchanted.”
“Just as long as I can use my sword. Now let’s go find those fairies, slay the dragon, feed the unicorn, and save the lamb from the evil queen!”
“I’m done.” The Knight leaned against the barn door. “There was no dragon, no fighting, and I have a headache from all this backstory.”
The Princess started to cry. “I thought you wanted to play with me?”
“I wanted to use my sword. Not talk for three hours.”
The Princess stomped her foot. “But you promised!”
“Whatever.” The Knight shrugged and walked away. “I’m leaving to find the Good Queen. Maybe she has more cookies.”
The Princess and the Knight just couldn’t agree on how to proceed. Should he go play with Legos and find more cookies? Could she fight the fairies, dragon, and evil witch on her own?
Seeing no end to the conflict, the Good Queen (mommy) showed up with homemade brownies and lemonade (deus ex machina) and said, “I slayed the dragon, sent the fairies out to the garden, fed the unicorn, put the lamb down for a nap, and the evil witch is doing laundry. So all is well!”
“Long live the Good Queen!” yelled the Princess and the Knight.
So the Princess and the Knight ate brownies, took baths, and read books. Then they went to bed and ended their day with a Happily Ever After.
Now I’d love to know–do you plan your stories or do the wait-and-see? And if you plot everything out first, do you have a favorite structure? Since I’m fascinated by writers who know where their stories are going, I’d love to hear how you do it!
All photos courtesy of Sharon Wray.